Been lurking around the forum for a while, so decided to post.
Brewed my first all grain back in January (no prev experience of brewing before but decide to jump in at the deep end!!)

Modicum of success but beer didn't clear, worked out why and not had a recurrence on following brews. However the abv was 8.5% so a bit on the strong side for me!!
Subsequent brews all turned out ok and drinkable, nice and clear and reasonable carbonation after bottling. Unfortuanately they don't stay bottled for long as I can't wait to try them. But learning to keep that under control.
Any way I thought I would post up the last recipe I brewed and invite comments. I found the recipe on the Beer Recipator website http://hbd.org/recipator/
23 litres
Colour: 13 HCU (~9 SRM)
Bitterness: 21 IBU
OG: 1.040 FG: 1.009
Alcohol: 4.1% v/v (3.2% w/w)
Grain: 3.18kg British pale
170g British crystal 50-60L
170g British brown
170g British amber
Mash: 80% efficiency
Single temperature infusion, 70°C for 90 minutes
Boil: 60 minutes SG 1.040 22.7 liters
Hops: 22.8g Fuggles (4.75% AA, 60 min.)
18g Fuggles (4.75% AA, 45 min.)
28.4g Kent Goldings (aroma)
Yeast: Safale 04
Mash Efficiency of 80%, not sure what I got as my og was only 1038 and not 1040 that was after a 3 hour mash and not 60 mins. I hit the final gravity target of 1009 and an abv of 3.94%.
Colour is a nice golden yellow seem fairly hoppy to me from initial tasting. If anyone has ago at please let me know.