Appreciate opinions on first time recipe

[Underthethumb]

Hi,

I have created this recipe for a bitter. I would appreciate your views.

Cheers

[Spud395]

I don't see anything wrong with that, it will certainly make a bitter.

You could halve the torry wheat if you want and still have a great head.
I would consider moving some or all of the stryian's to later in the boil ( 5 min or flameout) but that'd be a personal thing.