After my first AG beer (in fact i never made any kit or extract beer) that was an American Pale Ale, i am about to make my second beer in a few days. An Irish Red. I will show you my recipe and you could give me some recommendations or suggestions if i have planned anything wrong.
5 gallon batch (est.total efficiency 70%)
Grains
1) Pale malt Maris Otter (4.5 EBC) ---> 3.4kg (78.2%)
2) Caraamber (70 EBC) ---> 0.5kg (11.5%)
3) Biscuit (50EBC) ---> 0.35kg (8.0%)
4) Roasted Barley (1000 EBC) ---> 0.10kg (2.3%)
Hops
1) 20gr Fuggles (5.55%) 60min
2) 10gr East Kent Goldings (6.57%) 20min
3) 10gr Fuggles (5.55%) 10min
3) 15gr East Kent Goldings (5.5%) 5min
4) 20gr Williamette (4.20%) 3min
5) 10gr East Kent Goldings (6.57%) 1min
Yeast
WLP004 Irish Ale Yeast
It produces a slight hint of diacetyl, balanced by a light fruitiness and slight dry crispness.
Great for Irish ales, stouts, porters, browns, reds and a very interesting pale ale.
Estimated OG: 1.050
Bitterness: 23.4 IBU
Color: 32.5 EBC
4.9% ABV

(Actual image in BeerSmith is a bit darker than that)