Ben - we're on a very similar learning curve; here is my evolving BM50 set up, with a similar looking chiller and solar pump behind the FV.
Some questions;
1)Is there a technical reason for the pump BEFORE the chiller? I've put it after but your set up makes priming the pump that bit easier!
2) I am having a mare with hops getting through the Spiedel hop filter and clogging up the Plate Chiller and Solar Pump. I won't use it again. Do you use muslin hop bags or have you splashed out for one of the Utah BioDiesel filters? On my BM20 I got the Utah filters; including shipping and customs tax; came in at £120 ish Ouch.
3) Onto this design, how big is your plate chiller? I got the 125w one from the malt miller and as able to chill from 90 to 20 without record. Admittedly it uses lots of water but then I then fill up 3 FVs with this and use to wash brewing equipment, even wash the car! I had though about using an FV full of ice water and put the Spiedel immersion chiller on it then circulate the water through that to chill it down.
4) With the T piece at the bottom that will fire the wort both ways; wouldn't a simple 90 degree bend be better as it could aid whirl pooling?
Really keen to see your modifications as we're doing very similar stuff. Have you done a full 50L brew yet? Ive done one but with nearly 400g of hops lost loads to the blanket of hops on the bottom that was so deep it coverered all the heating elements!